Monday, March 26, 2018

Storytelling Blog Critique U for Uncertain




Our Better World is an organization supported by the Singapore International Foundation. It seeks to use the power of stories to impact change. Our Better World ran a campaign called A to Z Stories for Good, which used each letter of the alphabet to highlight an empowering word and story. The stories included in the campaign had clear focus for individual stories (which also means 26 separate issues) and encouraged people to help with the efforts.



For this assignment, I selected the letter U for Uncertain. The title was Cleaning up like a boss, and the first image is a video still of a smiling woman. This word Uncertain surprised me because it was unlike the other words which seem to be more positive. Words like Believe, Empower, Joy, and Real contrasted with the word Uncertain. The four-minute video was about a woman who found uncertain opportunities from the help of Aidha, a school to teach women in Singapore entrepreneurial and interpersonal skills. Aidha works directly with affected women, and it seeks to empower and provide opportunities for other members in the community. The woman in the video turns ‘junk into treasure.’

The format of the post is relatively simple. It begins with the video and includes minimal text description in the body of the content. There are a few options to click to aid the cause. These options include an option to become a mentor or sponsor. Each link takes the reader to the necessary page, and the sponsorship is $50. There are no options to share the blog or to make smaller contributions, so the options for supporters are limited. However, the layout of the options is aesthetically pleasing and clear to the reader.


Additionally, the story is told from a few different perspectives. The video starts with a woman who had limited opportunities. Then she found Aidha, and her life changed. I was concerned this may be a story about victims saved by an organization, but there was little focus on Aidha. One perspective is told from the point of view of the mentor, and it shows why she got involved. The text uses a different perspective, which I take as the perspective of Our Better World. It includes a little bit of background information, and they are the one’s asking for support from the reader.



After getting further into the video, I realized it was not a story about victims, but it was a story about powerful women making change in their everyday lives. Both the woman and the mentor shared their perspectives, and I was happy at the ending when the woman showed was proud of the progress and community contributions. The mentor had a small role, and it seemed to be included to demonstrate to the audience of what a mentor role could look like. At the end, the women are showed to be their own heroes. They are sheroes.



However, this is something I often wonder about. I sometimes feel as though people in the U.S. want stories about victims because they want to feel like they are making a ‘meaningful’ contribution. Because this story presents the issue, shows how someone made an effort to make a difference, and the women are happy, I wonder about the impact. At this time, I have not found out how well this section of the campaign did, but I am interested in the U.S. perception of stories about victims compared to the stories of those who are empowered.



As an effort to crowdsource, I am not sure if this post did what it was supposed to do. I think it would have been useful to have a share option, which is possible on social media, but there is not an option on the website. Additionally, I thought this story was pleasantly surprising in the campaign because of the varying use of the letter U. It did a great job of showing the positive in the word Uncertain, and it served as a good reminder that life is uncertain, but that does not mean it can’t be beautiful too.


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